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Tainted
Contributed by
Amanda_Interrupted
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Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 02:32:17 PM in AEST
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I want to feel the razor across my skin
Rip apart my veins and wallow in this sin
I want the blade to go deeper, until I see the red
I want the relief, and I want my blood to shed
My limbs begin to tremble and I feel faint
Morbid reminders that I will never be a saint
My blood is tainted with selfish splash
I'll be sane with just one more slash
Copyright@Amanda Bentley
Copyright ©
Amanda_Interrupted
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2004-05-20 14:32:17]
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Re: Tainted
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by alecfernadez on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 02:52:01 PM AEST
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| wow, this is a really really really really brilliant SI poem, it somes up how it ACTUALLY feels, not why you want to but how it feels and what you go through and the type of mentality your in. This is just wow. BTW I'm an SIer with emotionial problems so I like this cos I can relate to it very well |
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Re: Tainted
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 03:34:22 PM AEST
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| So filled with passion and flowing from beginning to end. Amazing. Simply amazing!You captured the emotions wonderfully. Words alone cannot do it justice. I really loved the last line. So true... so true... |
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Re: Tainted
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by Katie2008 on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 04:11:29 PM AEST
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| All I can say is wow. |
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