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Too Numb To Feel
Contributed by
true_poetry_writer
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Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 01:17:39 PM in AEST
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Trapped by the darkness around me
going insane blinded by the pain
distracted by nightmares
take away my breath I'm about to break
Too numb to feel
One step closer towards death
I can't take the hurt anymore
want the suffering and pain to end
no one cares im nothing nobody
Too numb to feel
Save me from my fears
don't wanna lose control
Taken by a force that gets me confused
running from the past to the future
Too numb to feel
Lost all hope and madness
wanting to hurt myself over and over again
no one to lean on I'm all alone
Too numb to feel
-Kim-
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Re: Too Numb To Feel
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by Black13 on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 01:21:19 PM AEST
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It was good.
I enjoyed reading it.
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Re: Too Numb To Feel
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by kailadragon on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 01:23:30 PM AEST
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| ((hug)) i love this poem and I know how it is to feel this way. thank you for this write and keep 'em comin!!! |
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Re: Too Numb To Feel
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by Remy on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 01:23:45 PM AEST
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feeeling is a good thing, it's something you should consider taking up again...
~Remy~ |
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Re: Too Numb To Feel
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by Katie2008 on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 04:23:47 PM AEST
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Wow, I really liked this. I feel exactly the same and you just captured my thoughts, that was incredible. Please don't feel that way though. Everyone in the world has at least one person that loves them. Best of luck!
Katie |
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Re: Too Numb To Feel
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by Stellar on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 12:08:47 AM AEST
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| I've been there and it'll get better. Very well written. |
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