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Everytime I Close My Eyes
Contributed by
ginsdance
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Wednesday, 9th October 2002 @ 04:50:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I only see your face
Everytime I close my eyes,
Maybe that's why my eyes stay open
Most of the time.
I only hear your voice
At night, when I'm trying to sleep,
It's in those aching hours
That I know it's my heart that you have managed to keep.
I only feel your caresses on my skin
Everytime I begin to dream,
I can block you out most of the time,
And that's a big step for me.
I never cry anymore,
Except on days that end in y,
I never remember you,
Just everytime I close my eyes.
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2002-10-09 16:50:00]
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Re: Everytime I Close My Eyes
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by herbleaf23 on
Wednesday, 9th October 2002 @ 06:17:18 PM AEST
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| i love the first half it's brilliant. but the last 6 lines make me want to wretch. i've written worse, however, so don't sweat it. not like what i think should make any difference anyways. but they provide this here forum for commenting and i felt the need to comment, so now that I've fulfilled my own inner need, we can all go on about our days. |
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Re: Everytime I Close My Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 04:45:54 AM AEST
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| Personally I like this poem, and I don't know what you think you are talking about herb. That comment was mean and rude. You didn't need to post that. |
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Re: Everytime I Close My Eyes
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 07:07:32 AM AEST
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I loved this write, Gin.... It says a lot..
Jenni |
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