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the blade
Contributed by
taintedmind
on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 11:19:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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the blade is my hero
you don't understand
i want to die
i feel the blades sharpness
i rub it on my skin
i see my slices
i see my life
i find a vein
and i go insane
i dream of my death
my funeral at most
i see alot of crosses
even though you know where i will go
my blood fills the floor
the carpet turns from white to red
i pass out as if i am dead
you don't see my pain
you should have let me die
but now i am counsled by a shrink
who doesn't know how a life can stink
but as i dream no matter the time
i see the blade that held my life
its all my fault i should have sliced twice
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Re: the blade
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by Dominus on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 12:16:10 PM AEST
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Well done, very deep writting and I understand what you where feeling when writting it, I have been there myself.
Nice work |
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Re: the blade
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by Remy on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 12:43:12 PM AEST
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man, suicidal tendencies is soooo 1983... lol, joking! this is dark and poetic - what more could i want?!? good write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: the blade
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by flash_16 on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 02:54:12 PM AEST
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| hey! i have to say that it was a good poem! but im worried about you! that was very suicidal! do you go to church????im here for you! |
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Re: the blade
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 11:42:53 AM AEST
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Oh my god i can relate to this so much... My parents think i am crazy but that's no lie.. I had to go see a shrink becuz i loved cutting myself and they don't understand what it feels like they think my life is perfect.. great poem it was excellent.. i really liked it..
christina |
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