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A gifted life
Contributed by
Mihiri
on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 10:44:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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If with all these troubles I somehow bear,
A pretty ring I shall get for to wear,
A stunning diamond studded necklace,
And be blest with a whole head full of hair
Pain swapped with riches,
What a wondrous exchange,
Feelings of contentment,
Instead of unanswered rage
A smile like a sparkling diamond,
A twinkle in the eye,
Immortal treasures that would stay with me,
Even after the day I die
Copyright ©
Mihiri
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2004-05-20 10:44:51]
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Re: A gifted life
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by Remy on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 12:53:16 PM AEST
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heh, this is an interesting one, makes you wonder about those old rich prunes on their deathbed...
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Re: A gifted life
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by Thivanka on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 02:50:58 AM AEST
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Nice one Mihiri, you really have the ability to rhyme the verses in an excellent way! It gives the poem a nice flow, great work!
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