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snow falls
Contributed by
lexxie
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Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 08:45:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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snow falls
it whispers
ozzing lava spitting flame
the snow falls
feeling burst
emotion bubbles
pains spitting
love rejected
sins forgivin
life spoken
unlived words
snow falls
it whispers
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2004-05-20 08:45:16]
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Re: snow falls
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by mountainhigh on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 08:56:36 AM AEST
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Falling snow dampens the noise of life, lets us think in the quiet of ourselves.
Thank you for sharing.
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Re: snow falls
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 04:34:38 PM AEST
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I really liked the contrast of snow and lava. Very well written.
Take care.
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Re: snow falls
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by Deablo on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 11:19:54 PM AEST
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Very good writing I liked the comparison of the snow falling and the ozzing lava spitting into flames. Very good work.
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