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A Hope's Fall

Contributed by Naijerana on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 07:44:23 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I’ am falling, falling in to darkness
I’ am forgetting things
my family, my friends, my self
Who am I, I ask my self, have I lost my heart
Have I lost my soul
why am I falling, what have I done
Why am I forgetting thing’s, about my past, about my self
Why isn’t there a bottom, where I can fall on
hoping that it is softly
Hoping it shall, it shall break my fall, but not breaking me
But when I come to the end of my fall will I see a beautiful light
With white rays of joy and happiness
Or will I see a awful light
of red rays of death and torment
Or will I stay between the two worlds to…. to….
It’s all starting to fade away
when will I listening to a
Speech of white….shines, everything is starting to … exile away
Everything I wants knew everything what I just said
is lost
I, i…. Falling …. Blackness everywhere
why … I Going down
In a hope’s fall

Copyright Â© Naijerana ... [ 2004-05-20 07:44:23]
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Re: A Hope's Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by infedelity_hurts on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 07:47:39 AM AEST
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some of the better stuff i have read here, feel like giving what i just posted a read? oh and by the way... you posted your other poem twice...

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