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Dirty Girl
Contributed by
nessa_lee
on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 11:33:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Dirty girl-
you don't belong!
Stupid girl-
can't you listen?
You go to any guy,
you just can't say no.
For some reason
you feel so ugly,
you don't feel any
self worth.
When a guy shows up
you crumble!
You dig a huge hole,
you can't crawl out of!
What's wrong with you?
Don't you care?
Stupid, Stupid
poor girl.
Wound up feeling used.
Just give in,
that's all you do.
Stop being so nice!
Stand up,
be a woman,
tell them who you are,
and that your not just some
dirty trash!
Copyright ©
nessa_lee
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2004-05-19 23:33:34]
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Re: Dirty Girl
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by Rylo on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 12:02:30 AM AEST
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| It sounds like you are really going through a lot in your life, but you seem to be going forward now which is really good. Nice read, and thanks for sharing. Just try to remember, you don't need to use sex, to land a nice guy. |
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Re: Dirty Girl
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by Chuck_Baclagon on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 12:32:00 AM AEST
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| I must say that I'll all out for women's empowerment and feminism, and I guess that's why this poem has gotten my attention, I hope that more girls would start speaking out their minds just as you did in this poem, thanks. |
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Re: Dirty Girl
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 02:21:32 AM AEST
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this poem reminds me of a girl i know
touches a senseitive spot
nice write |
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Re: Dirty Girl
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by JT on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 08:21:43 AM AEST
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| its hard to admit things like this to yourself but full respect for sharing. nice write |
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