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Blade
Contributed by
wontbbrokenagain
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Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:46:01 PM in AEST
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looking down apon myself
the sweet searing of pain
the blade across my skin
a feeling of such change
lifting up my hands
blood trickling up my arm
i wonder why i did this again
wondering how it got so far
How did i get tangled up?
i guess my emotions took over
again, slowly i slide the blade across my skin
somehow it takes the pain
pulling away all worry
but i cant stop
it feels so good
arms now covered in my crimson blood
wondering, why dont i do it now?
why not end it and never feel so down?
but as i wake i find i've died
never getting a chance to be alive
i look apon myself doing it again
realizing i did it
and this is my Hell
watching myself make the same mistake
watching myself take my last breath
watching myself die
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Re: Blade
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by Nessa_Lee on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 11:24:42 PM AEST
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| I can soo much relate to this! You have done an excelent job in expressing yourself and writting this. Great job! And keep on writting! |
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Re: Blade
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by Delusions on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 04:27:13 AM AEST
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| really great poem!!! keep em coming!!! ~Delusions~ |
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