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NO Title
Contributed by
wontbbrokenagain
on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:05:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My world is closing in
somehow i know itll soon come to an end
everyone is here but you
no one knows im so blue
Why cant you see
the love that was ment to be
when those words pass my lips
you know that will be the end
O God how my world is caving
somehow i know youll find out
my secret love of all time
you are mine
i am yours
i wanted to be together through this
a horrible darkness i call life
no one knows how sad i really am
i guess i hide it well
no one will ever read or hear this
so i know youll always be a secret
near and dear to my most deepest fear...
Death
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wontbbrokenagain
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2004-05-19 22:05:04] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: NO Title
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rylo on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 12:11:56 AM AEST (User
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This was a great read, but you know death is not one to be called upon. When you play around with death, then there will be nothing left. All of your dreams, and hope, wishes, and ones close to you, will be no longer yours to touch. I have been were this poem takes one to think of, but it really isn't worth thrown your life away over. Love plays many foolish games on ones heart, but love can also bring one the most sacred happiness of all. Well I think I have said enough, again this was a great read. |
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