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There In The Dark
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:01:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The whole of me is neatly wrapped up
In that brief, necessary – truly, forlorn- instant
There in the dark,
Between consciousness and sleep
I am still and quiet
My mind runs wild and free
Listening so
To hear the truth
Still
and
Quiet
Mute for now
With thoughts swirling
Wild
and
Free
The details are of little consequence to me
When the lonesome ending of the day
Creeps up to me
Lingering in the moment
I am still and quiet
My mind runs wild and free
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Silent-No-More
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2004-05-19 21:01:35]
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Re: There In The Dark
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:12:14 PM AEST
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very deep
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Re: There In The Dark
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by mountainhigh on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 09:23:14 AM AEST
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I like the quiet thought.
Thanks for sharing.
Chris |
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Re: There In The Dark
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 10:15:32 PM AEST
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I would like to think of those kinda feelings as relax-sation eh. :-)
Nice write I enjoyed that .
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Re: There In The Dark
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 01:04:34 AM AEST
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Beautiful. Its quite deep and written to perfection, as yours always are. I like how you set it out too but my favourite bit would have to be the first two lines.
Take Care
-Becca
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Re: There In The Dark
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 04:09:03 PM AEST
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Reminds me of a recent conversation I had...
It makes me wonder about the difference between ..being alone vs standing alone...both either with ..or without someone.... |
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Re: There In The Dark
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 02:01:38 AM AEST
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I can relate to this oh so much. A perfect poem that sets my mind to roam.
Thank you,
Timber
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Re: There In The Dark
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by ButchHoward on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 12:34:49 PM AEST
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"There in the dark,
Between consciousness and sleep
I am still and quiet
My mind runs wild and free"
Ah, you have entered "The Dreamtime!" Lovely work!
Butch |
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