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Falling
Contributed by
tinkkerbelle
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Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 08:19:12 PM in AEST
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Sometimes I feel like I'm falling.
I keep falling and falling and falling.
I can't stop.
Everything whirls around me-
School, friends, family, extra-curriculars.
It never stops, just like my falling.
Falling, whirling, falling, whirling.
Sometimes it makes me dizzy.
But then I go back to falling.
No one understands.
No one understands me.
No one understands my falling.
It frustrates me.
It makes me angry.
It makes me fall more.
So I resort to other things.
Things that might stop my falling.
Things that might stop my whirling.
I can't sleep.
I don't eat.
I cut.
Sometimes it makes my falling stop.
Sometimes I fall more.
I guess it just depends.
If it doesn't stop my falling,
I try it again.
It might stop my falling this time.
I don't eat anything, and when I do, I throw it up.
I can't sleep, sleep just won't come.
I cut- my arms, my ankles, my legs.
Sometimes I cut deep.
Sometimes it's just a scrape.
And sometimes it stops my falling.
People say that they're getting worried.
But I tell them I'll be okay.
And I will.
I will be okay.
Maybe not to them, but to me.
I'll be okay when I can stop falling.
MW 2001
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Re: Falling
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by Destiny on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 08:51:29 PM AEST
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This is a pretty good write, you express what everyone feels. Keep at it
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Re: Falling
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by Trisha on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:57:06 PM AEST
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I don't think you should cut yourself cause it's hurting yourself. I think you're in a lot of danger.
I think you should get some help. You know if you cut to deep you could kill yourself. |
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