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Rhythm of the Rain
Contributed by
Katie2008
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Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 07:11:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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It's all over now, we're through. I've had enough of you. With my words, I'll stab your heart, your black, black heart. You were so cold to me but now the rain is falling and washing away everything. The rain is finally falling, allowing me to start over new, I'm no longer afraid of losing to you. I hope your black, black heart is torn in two, I wish I could take back all those, "I love yous." I hated the way you were never there, how you made me feel so scared. But now I just don't care because the rain is falling and I can finally see you clearly again.
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Re: Rhythm of the Rain
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by Justalady on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 07:19:05 PM AEST
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| Well Katie... somehow the tears are the rain that washes away the pain. Take a step into the sunlight after the rain is over and it will seem so much brighter than before. Hugs, June |
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Re: Rhythm of the Rain
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by shorty_52 on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 07:39:15 PM AEST
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harsh but probally deserving. great poem i really enjoyed it. thanx for the good read!!!!!
~allyson~ |
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Re: Rhythm of the Rain
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 02:34:24 PM AEST
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Good rant! Hope it helped...
Jenni |
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Re: Rhythm of the Rain
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by Seikjo on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:11:08 PM AEST
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| hello just be dropping in to say that is stupid. Someone who hurts you was only hurt in his childhood so he doesn't have a black, black heart. Besides RHYTHM!! That is rain washing away all of you tears not making a rhythm. |
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