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Father Unkown
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 06:24:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You up and left before I was born,
Feels like you’re dead , I have no wanting to mourn,
Had your fun and walked away,
Without a bid of sorry to say.
I was the biggest mistake of your life,
But it wasn’t YOU who was left with all the strife,
It was my other maker who was left holding me,
You had moved on, nothing to see.
Do you even know that I exist?
Are you bothered about all those years you missed,
I have thought about who you are,
And if I have unknowingly drove past you in a car.
But like a typical man you took the easy way out,
You got what you wanted, of that I don’t doubt,
Here’s the evidence it can clearly be shown,
On my birth certificate it reads “Father Unknown”
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pixie
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2004-05-19 18:24:29]
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Re: Father Unkown
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 06:50:17 PM AEST
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| aw...I'm sorry about what happend..yur dad leaving and all..I'm glad to say I have a father...but Im not glad to say I never see nor talk to him...but I kind of know where you are coming from...I want you to know..it was his loss...great write...nice word flow...keep it coming.. |
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Re: Father Unkown
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by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:15:50 PM AEST
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| I agree its a shame hell never know the incredible talent you posess. great poem i wish you strenght in the future. |
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