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phaaroh
Contributed by
dolly_dagger
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Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 04:56:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You make me sick
With your stupid schemes.
Oh, foolish Phaaroh, in all your finery
Tinted, glinting with the tide of blood and sweat
Gushing from your slaves.
Materialistic man
With a sweet tooth for development
Nothing is good enough
Look out at the bare landscape
from your throne and
All you can see is new industry
Is it the fans or the servants blocking
the real vision?
I thought preservation was a tradition
you upheld, Mr. Almighty?
You should know
Some things are sacred
Please...
Just let them be
Copyright ©
dolly_dagger
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2004-05-19 16:56:19]
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Re: phaaroh
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by Jaded-Sunrise on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:27:51 PM AEST
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| Interesting Poem.Its diffrent from what your normally read.I enjoyed it. |
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Re: phaaroh
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:50:38 PM AEST
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| This is well written . I enjoyed it very much |
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Re: phaaroh
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 06:28:32 PM AEST
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| Nice! That's how I feel about nature too, I like to go for long walks where I can see nature; it is getting harder to find places where you do not hear cars going by. I hope the mall builders leave some places for us too. I hope they read your poem. |
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Re: phaaroh
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by shorty_52 on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 06:34:50 PM AEST
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this is a really great poem. i haven't read anything like this in a long time. keep up the good work k.
~allyson~ |
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Re: phaaroh
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:34:20 PM AEST
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well expressed well placed anger, i feel the same way, i live in a forest because i cannot tolerate the more civilized world, and when they log it breaks my heart, hugs n' love nessa
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