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TO FAR GONE
Contributed by
justinblue
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Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 04:48:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I sit here studying people in this smokey bar
None of them truely know who they are
A sinfull room with many a lost soul
Slowly drinking themselfs down a hole
In a crowded bar, yet without God, all alone
Many would say their to far gone
I say your not
In the hole your not caught
Beleive me there is hope
God is ready to lower a rope
Its up to you to latch hold and climb
Decide, God is waiting all the time
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2004-05-19 16:48:43]
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Re: TO FAR GONE
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by antares on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 06:46:14 PM AEST
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| what an uplifting hope filled message. beautiful piece. |
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Re: TO FAR GONE
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by Overstated on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 04:59:41 PM AEST
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| i like the structure of this piece |
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