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Goodbye.
Contributed by
blackmarker
on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:24:27 PM in AEST
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Hollow tears
Of fragile glass
Cascading down
As moments pass
Sunken eyes
Silently pleading
Can’t stop the monsters
That are feeding
On the bitter crust
Of my jagged soul
Bury me deep
In a 6-foot hole
Beneath the earth
No more to bother
Do me a favour
Tell my father
I’m sorry dad
But I think it’s true
I may have never
Even loved you
You were an ass
You made mistakes
The biggest one was teaching
Me to hate
Not to hate others
That isn’t fair
Only to hate you
Your vacant stare
Your stupid actions
Idiotic words
That I wish I had
Never heard
Don’t pretend
Don’t say “I love you”
It’s bad to lie
I know it’s not true
Lets be honest
Can you see
Just how little
You mean to me?
You were never here
When I needed you most
Nothing there but
The faded ghost
Of memories past
Feelings gone
Now it’s time
That I move on
Close this world
Open the next
I won’t miss you
Even in death.
Goodbye “daddy”.
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blackmarker
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2004-05-19 15:24:27]
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Re: Goodbye.
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:44:28 PM AEST
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| awww....I'm really sorry for you and what u went through or are going through with your dad...hopefully you will find what is making him that way...usually he is trying to tell you something...but can't find the way to...maybe you should try talking to him...you shouldnt give up on im he is part of you...you should live life knowing that u can say you have a dad that cares...if you figure out whats wrong with the situation your in....you'll know what I'm saying...great write...keep it soming... |
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Re: Goodbye.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 04:42:55 PM AEST
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I am so very sorry your life has been like this. The lack of character of your father seems to have created a deep chasm in your life. Hopefully you can find love somewhere to fill it back up with.
Rita |
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Re: Goodbye.
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by antares on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:14:41 PM AEST
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| first of all i am sorry for all the pain you must be feeling. as the others have said maybe you shouldnt give up just yet..fathers are a precious thing and you only have one! besides that its a great write! |
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Re: Goodbye.
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by mountainhigh on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 09:15:36 AM AEST
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This is a very good poem, you have much skill. Know this too, you are also unique, and needed, there one day may be one from you so unique too, and needing the right imspiration, needing you.
Thank you for sharing this.
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