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Utopia on the Horizon
Contributed by
heddermarie
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Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:21:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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There's a utopia on the horizon,
That believers can only see,
A place that is calming and peaceful,
Exactly what this world needs.
Where the sun is always shining,
And all you need is Heaven's light,
A place where no sorrow is allowed,
The epitome of the afterlife.
There's a utopia on the horizon,
And I can feel it's warm rays on me,
A place where you are guided by the Lord's hand,
And happiness is all you see.
This utopia,
Is where the horizon and Heavens meet,
A place where you are spiritually cleansed,
And are guided by your feet.
It's just beyond the clouds,
Where the Lord welcomes you as "my son",
A place where you can rest and find peace,
A utopia on the horizon.
*Heather Marie Hutchins*
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heddermarie
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2004-05-19 15:21:19]
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Re: Utopia on the Horizon
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by Overstated on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:22:53 PM AEST
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nicely written some beautiful images are placed in this poem - well done :)
feel free to comment on my poems btw... |
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Re: Utopia on the Horizon
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:28:11 PM AEST
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| the world cant have a utopia for everyone because everyones perfect place or vision of perfect is different. a utopia is meant for one person i suppose. |
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Re: Utopia on the Horizon
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by Cole on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 08:15:55 PM AEST
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| I think this should be seperated into stanzas. Have a break after line 4, 8, 12, and 16. Other than that though, this is very well written. I really enjoyed reading it. |
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