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Dreams of once were and now.
Contributed by
heartfilledblood
on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 01:52:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I once had a dream
Of you and me
Of once was of our family
The moments of times we shared
Of times we all were one big family
Times of no pain
The time of love
I once had a dream
Of you and me
Of once was of YOUR family
I hold a light
It burns with such spite
As I light the memories once shared
Once shared with you inside
As I watch you say too me
The words of no meaning
No meaning from you to me
For Im done with you and me
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heartfilledblood
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2004-05-19 13:52:47]
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Re: Dreams of once were and now.
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 01:59:29 PM AEST
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Hi there, your titles aren't lame atall, it fits the poem really well, which is also good, keep up thre writing
Pixie xx |
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Re: Dreams of once were and now.
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 02:12:25 PM AEST
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| you are a good writer...keep it up...awesome write...and I'm sorry for you know if the poem is true...i'm sorry things get hard sometimes...great write...keep it coming!!! |
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Re: Dreams of once were and now.
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by shorty_52 on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 07:56:44 PM AEST
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hey i hope that's not about me but i don't actually think it is. good poem daric . keep up the good work and nothin in it was lame so don't worry about it.
luv ya bunches
xoxo
~allyson~ |
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