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Don't
Contributed by
StrangeLittleGirl
on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 12:25:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Don't tell me I'm ugly, I already know,
Don't call me a freak, I don't want it to show,
Don't tell me to cut myself, I already did,
Don't tell me you hate me, I don't give a ****,
Don't call me an outcast, I like it that way,
Don't try to torment me, every single day.
Don't think to torture me, or mess up my life,
Don't stab me in the back, if it's not with a knife.
Don't hurt me or tease me, or cause me pain,
Don't confuse me more, I'm already insane.
Don't try to deceive me, you already have,
Don't ask me why?, you're driving me mad.
Don't mess with my feelings, I know you will,
Don't look at me please, you're making me ill.
Don't tell me to see a doctor, you know I won't,
Don't tell me you care, 'cause I know you don't,
Don't bother speaking to me,
Don't try to touch me,
Don't come near me at all,
Don't try to help,
Don't talk to me,
Don't catch me if I fall.
We know you hate me really,
I hate myself too,
I know nobody cares,
So I'll die like you all want me to.
Copyright ©
StrangeLittleGirl
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2004-05-19 12:25:55]
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Re: Don't
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 12:56:04 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful poem, but it's a shame that you have to be going thru all this pain to know how to write about it in the first place ((HUGS))
Very powerful, I for one don't want you to die
takecare
Pixie xx |
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Re: Don't
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 02:10:39 PM AEST
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| NOOOOOOO!!!!!! Don't say that, you have talent, you have a way of writing your poems...just don't do anything...it is a good poem, sad, but I can tell you are speaking the truth...I'm a cutter, but don't wish to die, just if you have to fel any pain...without resorting to death....cut, if thats all you know...don't do anything life will get better...it will have a way of picking itself up again!!!great write... |
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Re: Don't
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by JT on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:46:44 AM AEST
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Ive been here. its hard. everything you captured here I can feel. The words sting but what a write. keep writing
-jt- |
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