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Daniel Huggins
Contributed by
little_genna
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Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:12:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Days pass by as I think of you.
All I could ever want lies in you.
Now I need to do something to make us come to be.
I love you babe, I’m glad you can see it.
Every day you tell me you love me.
Love is our special procession.
How every time we do not talk I miss you.
Ugly you are not.
Gorgeous you definitely are.
Gooey is the feeling you make me feel inside.
Is this feeling the same for you?
Never say something you are not truthful to.
Sexy you say I am, all I can say is thank you.
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Re: Daniel Huggins
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:15:31 AM AEST
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this line 'Never say something you not are not truthful to'. should read
'Never say something you are not truthful to' sorry for the mess up of that line guys.
love and hugs
XgenX
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Re: Daniel Huggins
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:17:32 AM AEST
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this is cute! :)
good writing |
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Re: Daniel Huggins
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by Cole on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 08:12:57 PM AEST
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Based on just the first stanza, I thought this was going to be a pretty good poem for something you wrote when you were bored. But, then I read the second stanza, and I realized how forced things can be.
-Kholie-
P.S. - I had no intention as coming across as rude. I reread the post, and it might have sounded that way. It should be taken light-heartedly. |
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