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GIRL part:III
Contributed by
AmaNdAsHepArD
on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:50:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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but it didn't end there
each night they came in
draggin themselves
one by one
until she spoke out
and told her father
of the abuse
he yelled, and screamed
acussed her of teasing
beat her black and blue
and left her there crying tooo
so one night she decieded i had enough
of this
took a razor and a rope
and ended her
misserable life
now shes not a child nor a play thing for the boys
she is just an angle of darkness
and what the sadness of abuse
made her become
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2004-05-19 09:50:47]
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Re: GIRL part:III
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by Trisha on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:25:41 AM AEST
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Re: GIRL part:III
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by emphaticplacebo on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 11:50:37 AM AEST
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| i have read the GIRL trilogy, and I think that its a really great write, despite it being ridden with sadness and grief. You truly have a talent, and I hope you will continue tapping into it. |
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