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Poems
Contributed by
bubblekiller13
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Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:08:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I wrote my first poem when I was 9
I called it "seasons"
because that's what it was about
and my english teacher gave me a smiley face
and my parents beamed with pride
and I beamed with pride
When I was 14 I wrote a poem
I entitled it "crushed"
because thats what I was
family, friends, boys; all crushed me
my teacher said it was real poery
my parents exchanged looks
I just felt like crying
About mid-17 I wrote a dark poem.
Gave it the name of "alone"
because thats how i felt day in
and day out...alone
my so called boyfriend was a transparent blur
and everyone else seemingly figments of a hell-like imagination
my high school teacher thought I should seek help
my parents argued over whose fault it was
and I started hating not only them
but me
A few minutes ago I wrote my final poem ]
I called it ..."ending abyss"
because thats what i wanted
everyone i knew depressed me
and I depressed me
The poem told the story
of a troubled girl, who ended it all
she was a heroine
she was my suicide vixen
my professor held a moment of silence on Monday
my parents cried non-stop for weeks
but I had finally found my peace
I felt....nothing
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2004-05-19 09:08:06]
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Re: Poems
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 09:33:17 AM AEST
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Life is tough as is .And your parents is not helping you by blaming each other.I can also understand what your saying .I felt the same way when i was at your age.try to hang in there .if you ever need to talk to someone pm me ok.
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Re: Poems
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 02:33:15 PM AEST
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"I felt....nothing"
i can relate to that. sad write and i liked it alot.. life is tough we all know that..
christina |
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