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CONFUSED
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
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Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 07:55:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Alone she sits waiting his return
The love inside passion still burns
Wonder's what's taking him so long
Is that him whistling, is that their song
The darkness illuminates a full moon
Star light reflections at twelve noon
Memories drown out her confusion
He looks so beautiful this is no illusion
A Nightingale Sang in Berkeley Square
Their love song memories taken unaware
A little confused her mind has become
Alone with memories his constant hum
Sitting by the window, missing him so
Went out seems such a long time ago
Wanting him to be by her side
Looked so beautiful as his bride
Looks at her fingers all wrinkled and old
Remembers the ring is fifty years old
A tear slowly falls upon her soft cheek
Many years have flown seems like a week
Time to sleep no thoughts of despair
In the corner sits an old rocking chair
Received a hand from heaven finds rest
Souls joined as one true love blessed
Love Angelxxxx
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sweetangeluk
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Re: CONFUSED
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 08:55:13 AM AEST
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this is beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: CONFUSED
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 08:56:27 AM AEST
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I like ita good poem on growing old together.
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Re: CONFUSED
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by little_genna on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 05:20:31 AM AEST
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the only way to describe this is wonderfully beautiful. it was such a pleasure for my eyes to read. thank you for sharing this amazing poems.
love and hugs
XgenX |
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Re: CONFUSED
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 07:40:07 AM AEST
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Ahhh Beautiful...and so precious.....
Jenni |
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Re: CONFUSED
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 03:43:04 PM AEST
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| Love growing stronger through the ages always brings me joy. Great write |
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Re: CONFUSED
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 10:31:35 AM AEST
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| This is such a sad story in the beginning but ends happily. Very sweet write! Cheers! |
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Re: CONFUSED
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:00:10 PM AEST
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this brought a tears 2 my eyes, i was right u r a poet par excellance, this peice is absolutely beautiful . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: CONFUSED
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 01:04:58 PM AEST
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| Sweetangel. I have re-read your beautiful poem. In september my lovely wife and I have our Golden Wedding; and our rings, I could not afford anything expensive in those far off days, do look a bit the worse for wear. Thank you for sharing love from Bernard. |
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Re: CONFUSED
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by SimplyMe on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 03:31:02 PM AEST
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Execllence!!! Sheer baeuty shines through this poem. I used to sit back and wonder what it would feel like to grow old with somebody and still be in love. You just gave me a glimpse of just that. Great job. Heartfelt write. Much love.
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Re: CONFUSED
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 12:20:42 PM AEST
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Awww Angel! This is so beautiful and sad...What a wonderfully expressed write!! I love this, and I'm glad I read it...
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