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Verge
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
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Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 07:11:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I am on a verge!
its not no ordinary verge
Its the verge of Death!
I see its icey breath breathing down my neck.
I see its long boney fingers out streched for me.
I hear the cries of unknown demons calling me.
Please someone wake me from this nightmare.
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2004-05-19 07:11:20]
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Re: Verge
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 07:18:42 AM AEST
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vivid...to wake from the nightmare on must look far within themselves
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Re: Verge
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by shorty_52 on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 08:02:22 PM AEST
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DAMN!!!! this is really good. keep up the good work.
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Re: Verge
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by little_genna on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 05:16:52 AM AEST
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this is a rather gripping poem in its shortness. deaths grasp is definitely well described here. great write!
love and hugs
XgenX |
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