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That Song
Contributed by
lembayung
on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 12:20:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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That Song
A silent song whispered from the shore,
blowing through the western wind
containing a lot of desirous words
poured out into the lonely ocean rock
wetted it all the body,
no freezing, just squeezing,
getting hard and harder...
and stopped after the disappearance song with the wind
There is no sound from the beginning
and always be the same
until the rock suddenly trembled,
no bass, just treble,
getting loud and louder...
it seem like uncontrolled voice
coming out from the deepest heart
it supposed to be hurt, very and very hurtful
and it shouldn't happen, should not.
nothing can be described
if that song comes again...
Copyright ©
lembayung
... [
2004-05-19 00:20:49]
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Re: That Song
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:31:15 AM AEST
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| interesting little write... thanks for sharing |
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Re: That Song
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by juliette on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:20:46 PM AEST
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I honestly think you should edit this for grammer/spelling and repost because the poem kicks butt!! It is creative and unique and I like it!
Thanks for sharing!
juliette |
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Re: That Song
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by The_Unknown on
Friday, 26th November 2010 @ 04:09:36 PM AEST
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I agree with juliette although, I don't know if you ever re-posted or not.
Either way, good write.
- T_U |
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