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Contributed by
BlackAngel
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Wednesday, 9th October 2002 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Help
I'm alone
I was left all alone
Shivering in a corner
Help
I'm scared
I hear the cars go by
But no one stops to help
Help
I'm slipping
Slowly but surely
I'm falling away from you
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BlackAngel
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2002-10-09 13:35:00]
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Re: Help
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 02:03:23 AM AEST
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I'm not sure if I've got this right Deanna, but it reads to me as though it's about a little abandoned puppy, all cold, wet and alone in an alleyway?
It's made me think! Good writing, I just hope I understood it Ok. If not let me know.
With love
Dean;-) |
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Re: Help
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by BlackAngel on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 03:07:12 AM AEST
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| I was to be something along the lines of being abandoned, it doesn't matter what, just something, I too was not so sure about it when i wrote it.. |
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