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You're the only one I love
Contributed by
Black_Rose15
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:37:39 PM in AEST
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I really love you with all of my heart,
I wish that we could never part.
Your every word ease all my pains,
If i'm not with you I'll go insane.
I think of you all the time from morning until night,
And then I'll still be thinking of you when I see the morning daylight.
You mean more than the whole world to me,
Your smiling face is the only thing I wanna see.
So I hope you will understand how much I love you,
Because you're the only one I love and that's true.
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Black_Rose15
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2004-05-18 22:37:39]
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Re: You're the only one I love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:43:09 PM AEST
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That is pretty good for a first poem. Keep writing if you enjoy it. You are better than you think. We all had to start somewhere. This is as good a start as any.
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Re: You're the only one I love
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:54:16 PM AEST
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Great write for a first start..... keep hem coming.
Welcome to the best poetry site on the net..
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Re: You're the only one I love
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 11:19:48 PM AEST
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this is very pretty, keep writing, you have talent, warm welcome to ypdc too:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: You're the only one I love
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by Dragontear27 on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 12:10:46 AM AEST
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| OMG HILARY you think that poem is dumb no no no no no very good esspecially for your first time!!! Once again great poem xoxoxoxoxo |
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Re: You're the only one I love
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 12:48:13 AM AEST
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Ddditto, what they said.
exceptionlly good for the first write.
I wouldn't have known it was your first if ya hadn't told me.
Welcome to our global family.
luv, huggs,
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Re: You're the only one I love
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 08:04:43 AM AEST
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You are off to a good start. Keep writing.
The things that come right from your heart are the best place to begin.
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