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Weakness
Contributed by
essentially9
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:15:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Weakness
I don't know everything
I'm sure that it's killing me
The wondering
The uncertainity
My weakness
They all have combined
To give me my worst greif
With every situation
I'm bound to them
With every time
I never leave their grasps
I'm controlled and killed
If I was stronger than this
I would be free of them
If I was stronger than this
I would never feel this
But I'm not stronger
I grow weaker and weaker
To where I've succumbed
To being nothing
And it's my fault
For being weak and giving in
To feeling with my heart
And not thinking with my mind
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Re: Weakness
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:46:40 PM AEST
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Feelings and thoughts can be either weaknesses or strengths. It depends if you are wise enough to use both heart and mind and do what is best for you despite what you might really want. Want and need are two separate things which sometimes we fail to realize. Good luck.
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Re: Weakness
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 02:26:27 PM AEST
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| I doubt there is any real weakness inside of you.You have more to speak of and scream of then most people I know twice your age..This write is another great post..It speaks volumes |
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Re: Weakness
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by sydney2strite on
Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 06:37:53 PM AEST
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| I love this poem! |
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