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Eternal
Contributed by
ivy
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:53:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Our Friendship.
Our Love.
Our Togetherness.
Our Fun.
Our Laughter is Eternal.
It is US who are Eternal together.
LIKE
The mountains in the plains.
The ocean in the Sea,
The sun and the moon,
The stars in the sky and
The sand in the desert.......
Copyright ©
ivy
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2004-05-18 21:53:55] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Eternal
(User Rating: 1 ) by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:00:19 AM AEST (User
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Sweet and romantic, a gentle reverie...
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Eternal
(User Rating: 1 ) by Damien on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 11:16:29 AM AEST (User
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This is a really lovely write and all those things you've written about are truely eternal forever :"> Damien |
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Re: Eternal
(User Rating: 1 ) by aaaka on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:03:21 AM AEST (User
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Nice write. |
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