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I've Forgiven..now..I'm forgotten
Contributed by
Jaded-Sunrise
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:47:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sorry for not being perfect
Sorry for not being the best
Sorry for not getting down on my hands and knees and kissing you butt at your request
Forgive me for not dropping everything
Forgive me for not stopping on a dime
But I'm not dealing with your same old crap
Not anymore
NO not this time
I've considered going back
Too late
I've been replaced
Now I lay here on the floor
As you and your fake friends spit in my face
You walk by me
Like we've never met
I guess that's what they mean
by saying forgive and FORGET
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Jaded-Sunrise
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2004-05-18 21:47:55]
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Re: I've Forgiven..now..I'm forgotten
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:56:49 PM AEST
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| Well written...good flow.....Be strong do not go back. |
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Re: I've Forgiven..now..I'm forgotten
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by Chrissylee on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:26:28 PM AEST
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| nice write can feel the hurt in yuor heart in this one keep up the good work |
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Re: I've Forgiven..now..I'm forgotten
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by Another_Dimension on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:36:43 AM AEST
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| Oooooh!! Now this is what i like!! very very good, :D x 5/5 |
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Re: I've Forgiven..now..I'm forgotten
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by Overstated on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:20:52 PM AEST
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| a lot of pain is represented in this good write shame about the situation the protagionist was in though. |
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Re: I've Forgiven..now..I'm forgotten
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by aaaka on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:00:18 AM AEST
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| Great release of expression. Well done. |
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