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Gone Forever
Contributed by
Bloodthirsty
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:32:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I just cant seem to sleep
I miss you so much
I miss the way I used to hold you
I miss the feeling of your touch
I miss your beauty and nothing comes close
To what you ment to me
But I gave you up
Your gone forever
It was time to set you free
I watched him walk away with you
And in my heart I prayed
That he would put you somwhere safe
My beautiful razorblade
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Bloodthirsty
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2004-05-18 21:32:03]
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Re: Gone Forever
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by Delusions on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:31:08 AM AEST
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| oh wow i really like this poem... it is really well written... cool twist at the end!!!! Keep em coming ~delusions~ |
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Re: Gone Forever
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by aaaka on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 07:49:23 AM AEST
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| Great twist like the end of a who done it movie. Great write. |
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