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Before I Know
Contributed by
Kirby
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:17:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Can't think, my minds blank
Is this the calm before the storm
Or the happy ending to our start
There is rain, but will it pour
A rainbow is there, will it shine
You can unlock my heart, but will you
I love you baby, do u feel the same
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Re: Before I Know
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by aaaka on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:28:35 PM AEST
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| o.k. short and to the point. I find it pleasing to read. |
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Re: Before I Know
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:32:32 PM AEST
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| The calm before ths storm....i like this short and to the point. |
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Re: Before I Know
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 12:54:26 AM AEST
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| thats what it should be before the rain subsides...lovely poem. venkat |
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Re: Before I Know
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 08:14:52 PM AEST
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very sweetly heartfelt, i hope at the end of your rainbow is the pot o' gold:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Before I Know
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by morelikelyrics on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 09:27:51 PM AEST
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Is this the calm before the storm
Or the happy ending to our start
Truly a quick and portraying line... Lays the feeling right in front of you... (quite witty as well)
Definitely a joy to read...
~Morelikelyrics |
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Re: Before I Know
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:19:47 PM AEST
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very good write very interesting
love tasha |
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Re: Before I Know
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by Justalady on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 10:06:38 PM AEST
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| Simple phrases, asking only honest questions...... no hiding the meaning in its words. Nice work. June |
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