|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Not One Of Us!!!!
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:08:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
|
I wanna say
that you
you are a moron
for the things
you've been say to us,
we're all just flowing
painting pictures
and you're a Demon
not one of us.
If i could get ya
smash into little pieces
chase you back into that
darkness
where you hide
where there's no laughter
better run
cause you i'm after.
You can never
be
one of us,
no never ever
be
one of us!!!!!
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2004-05-18 21:08:59]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Not One Of Us!!!!
(User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:16:12 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
LMAO! I liked it! Way to tell whoever it was off! Great work!
Katie |
|
|
Re: Not One Of Us!!!!
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:00:20 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| this even made me angry. ahh! |
|
|
Re: Not One Of Us!!!!
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:40:20 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
well, they cant do it anymore because mick made it so everyone has to sign in to comment, theres a forum too:) great vent poem, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
|
|
Re: Not One Of Us!!!!
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:57:16 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Haaa, U tell um darlin and I sit here and pat my foot.........
fortunatly I haven't been attaked my the demon yet. Course If I had to retailiate I'd have to put my write in the special sectioon 'cause my words wouldn't be suitable to children.
Good write.
luv, huggs, ssmiles,
emy |
|
|
Re: Not One Of Us!!!!
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 12:01:47 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow..I'd sure hate to get on your bad side....
:>)
Jenni |
|
|
Re: Not One Of Us!!!!
(User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 05:19:53 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Good vent. I agree, 2 fingers to whoever you are.........coward!!!!
Most of us agree with you, thanks for saying what we're all thinking.
Ali xx |
|
|
Re: Not One Of Us!!!!
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:03:10 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is great, it said what we all think, and said it well.
Love Dawny x |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
