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So Blind
Contributed by
EvaRee
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:08:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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My heart is aching
I'm dying inside
why does everyone
have to be so damn blind?
You would think someone
would actually see
the marks and the tears
the real unhidden me.
Cant anyone get passed
my pretty face
maybe next I'll cut that
and give them a taste.
A taste to see
whats really going on
inside my pretty head
thats been there so long.
I just want someone
to actually know
that my smiles aren't real
it's all a big show.
Is it too much to ask
for someone to care
someone who listens
while my tears I share?
But no, not me
It just cant be true
I'm just too perfect
or atleast I fooled you...
Copyright ©
EvaRee
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2004-05-18 21:08:28]
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Re: So Blind
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by Katie2008 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:10:12 PM AEST
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| That was very well written, I enjoyed it. I can relate a lot to this poem. |
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Re: So Blind
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:58:47 PM AEST
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| excellent. ive wrriten stuff such as this myself. people are too judgemental these days. but what is the price to pay? |
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Re: So Blind
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by brigitte7735 on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:07:51 AM AEST
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I just wanted to let you know how much i like your writing, this along with " She's So Pretty ". I find a lot of personal meaning in them.
Vanessa |
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