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Loving you
Contributed by
Dragontear27
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:44:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I stare at you form a distance
hoping you will someday see me
and learn of my existance
Then i meet you that glorious day
that was the first time i was in love
it was like heaven but i could think of nothing to say
I unveiled my feelings for you on the spot
you gave me an akward look and said
that you'd never love me like i thought
Instead i'd only be a friend to you
that was the only thing you asked from me
those words peirced my heart and even now they still do
So now i know my place in your life
its only to be a friend and nothing more
it feels like i've been stabbed with a knife
So i think to myself was it a waste of time
to go after somthing that wast true
and all the things i said to you i rue because all i had to say was i love you.
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Re: Loving you
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by aaaka on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:56:26 PM AEST
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| pretty good. Sad but pretty good. keep looking there is someone for everyone. |
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Re: Loving you
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 11:46:45 PM AEST
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wow, great poem, i also knew someone for years like that, only it was slightly different as we went from best friends to planning a whole life together and then he said, 'oh lets be friends, you are unworthy to be my wife' i cannot even stand to talk to him now, i wont, he was so ungenuine to me, hopefully at least you still have a friend in her and i think it is comendable you told your true feelings, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Loving you
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by swiftsouljah on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 04:34:14 PM AEST
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yeah... i know what you mean i have 23 poems about just that
wayne |
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