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Dropping Black Roses
Contributed by
tinkkerbelle
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 07:58:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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In rememberance of you,
I drop a black rose.
In rememberance of what we once shared,
I drop a black rose.
For what we once had,
I drop a black rose.
For the bond and trust we built,
I drop a black rose.
Because of the memories we formed,
I drop a black rose.
In rememberance of the love we once had,
I drop a black rose.
Since I still love you,
I drop a black rose.
I am constantly dropping black roses.
I am running out of black roses.
MW 2002
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tinkkerbelle
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2004-05-18 19:58:40]
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Re: Dropping Black Roses
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by Katie2008 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:12:45 PM AEST
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Well, I must say, what a lovely, touching piece! Great job! You rock!
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Re: Dropping Black Roses
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:21:06 PM AEST
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The thought behind the poem was lovely but the repetitive phrase "I drop a black rose" became tiresome after the second one. You might try reworking it so it won't be so repetitive because truly there is a lovely poem in there.
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Re: Dropping Black Roses
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by CassandraS on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:39:22 PM AEST
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This poem reminded me of past relationships. It was a truly touching poem. Keep writing...you're really good.
Cass |
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Re: Dropping Black Roses
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:19:26 PM AEST
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| I feel you on this flow....well done. |
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Re: Dropping Black Roses
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by JT on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:38:59 PM AEST
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| Nice write. A little repetative, but who am I to comment. Keep writing : ) |
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Re: Dropping Black Roses
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:58:42 PM AEST
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wonderful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Dropping Black Roses
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by kailadragon on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 01:29:08 PM AEST
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| a bit monotonus, but still a good poem. |
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