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Ocean Wave
Contributed by
kore
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 07:23:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Away you ocean wave
You’ve come to haunt my days
When I send these thoughts to sea
You bring them back to me
I cast away these thoughts
Because I want them not
But seeming faithfully
You bring them back to me
I try so hard to escape
When throwing them away
Destroying my chance to be free
You bring them back to me
I am still stuck here
On a cold and lonely shore
Wanting so bad to leave
Before they come back to me
Standing here alone
Miles away from home
Wanting to believe
It won’t come back to me
But never does it change
This tormenting little game
I put bad thoughts to sea
And you bring back to me.
Copyright ©
kore
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2004-05-18 19:23:38]
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Re: Ocean Wave
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by shorty_52 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 07:35:36 PM AEST
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good job* does the ocean really do that? i've only been there once?
great poem
~allyson~ |
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Re: Ocean Wave
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by angelrae on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 09:35:40 PM AEST
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| A nice poem. I love the ocean. So awesome and beautiful. |
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Re: Ocean Wave
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:25:29 PM AEST
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| brilliant poem. great metaphor. and excellent flow and rhyme. |
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