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Scattered Pieces
Contributed by
tamilyn
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 07:03:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Pieces scattered on the floor
And from within, a void
Hole of blackness, wall of pain
Confidence destroyed
Total isolation
Creeping up and down the hall
Ladder of uncertainty
Resist the urge to crawl
Withdraw into insanity
A pit of deep despair
Emotional destruction
A panic in the air
Tears of harsh reality
The sting of open wounds
The pleading of a bitter heart
Echoes throughout the room
Pieces scattered on the floor
The remnants of my soul
Futile misconceptions
Of dysfunctional control
Copyright: Tammy Hendershot
2004
Copyright ©
tamilyn
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2004-05-18 19:03:03]
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Re: Scattered Pieces
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by shorty_52 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 07:12:44 PM AEST
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great write. keep up the good work.
~allyson~ |
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Re: Scattered Pieces
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by Jaded-Sunrise on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 07:36:18 PM AEST
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| Good Poem,it was very well written.Has a nice smooth flow to it. |
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Re: Scattered Pieces
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:24:32 AM AEST
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Good work with a great imagery... Sweet sorrow gives the most wonderful words...
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Scattered Pieces
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by jan on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 07:21:50 AM AEST
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| Love it! The imagery is perfect! |
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Re: Scattered Pieces
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 07:44:16 AM AEST
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| I'm struck by all the images you've employed here. Impressive. My regards. |
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