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the talk
Contributed by
shorty_52
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:30:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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we need to talk
just you and me
i said to him one day.
we walk away
and i pull out a gun
i say it's not for you but me.
you see i've been depressed
for way to long
three months it soon will be.
and before i go
we need to talk
with you
and only me!
why did you play
why did you cheat
i really don't want to be a ****
but you've left me with no respect!
you never liked me
so why'd you want me
you hurt me so bad
that's it for me.
he tried to stop me
but it was to late
the pull of the triger
decide my fate.
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shorty_52
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2004-05-18 18:30:16]
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Re: the talk
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by Jaded-Sunrise on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:56:00 PM AEST
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Very moving
Sad
I liked it though |
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Re: the talk
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by mountainhigh on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:59:45 PM AEST
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It is a sad poem, and as you say, it make you think and made you fear...I hope others see the same.
Thanks for sharing.
Chris |
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Re: the talk
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by aaaka on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:09:37 PM AEST
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| Too Deep!! Love it |
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Re: the talk
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by Vermillion on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 06:26:42 AM AEST
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excellent flow and choice of words. as if i could see it unfolding before my eyes.
~vermillion~ |
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