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I'm That Girl
Contributed by
pyrochick
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 05:57:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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I see a girl
with tears and fears
the tears runnin down her face
and the fears whiched caused them to flow
she's got a couple bruises here and there
and still no one is there to care
she hears the voices in her head
and see's the blood she has bled
she's got cuts from arms to legs
she wants some one to stop the pain
if she had to, she would beg
she's afriad she might go insane
she wants to hide away from the world
she wishes she could be a normal girl
i'm looking at the mirror
and all i see is that girl
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pyrochick
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2004-05-18 17:57:45]
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Re: I'm That Girl
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:02:11 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry. I wish I could make you feel better. You sure can write poetry. Bravo and encore with this great writing.
Love,
Chelsea |
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Re: I'm That Girl
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by Katie2008 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:27:01 PM AEST
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| Wow, that was really deep. I really liked it, I think a lot of people can relate. You're an excellent writer, great job. |
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Re: I'm That Girl
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:39:41 PM AEST
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| Hang on...the pain will subside sooner or later. |
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Re: I'm That Girl
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by Cherriesbroken725 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:24:54 PM AEST
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HEy kat its me and i care ok !!!!!!!!!!! But u r agood peom writer thing ok zipper buddy lol you'll get it hold on ok
Love Taketra (lol) |
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