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Ending It All
Contributed by
Bloodthirsty
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 05:50:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Can you feel the rush of pain as you strike a vein?
Metal tearing at your skin reviling the beautiful treasure within
Can you feel yourself going insane?
Sitting in a dizzy daze, watching the world around you spin
Can you see yourself hit the floor?
Passing out cold as the story of your death unfolds
Do you realize why you cant do this anymore?
You didnt know when to stop so now we will never know what your future holds
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Bloodthirsty
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2004-05-18 17:50:01]
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Re: Ending It All
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by Jaded-Sunrise on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:05:49 PM AEST
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| That is a really good poem.It was so well wrote.I love it. |
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Re: Ending It All
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by Delusions on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:38:54 AM AEST
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| awsome poem... its a fine line between just enough and too much... scary thought!!! Keep em coming ~delusions~ |
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