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Love and Loveless

Contributed by saint on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 05:29:19 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

countless hours and countless days
to realise the error of your way's
nothing matters when things go wrong
becuase you know that you are strong

strong enough to resist the stress
but alas it will get to you none the less
the problems just keep flowing in
that last piece of thread growing thin

your patience has gone, never to return
you have hatred left, so little to earn
the life you knew is disappearing
and the heavy mist, only just clearing

what matters now, is to start again.
you lost yourself unto the strain
there's nothing wrong without a doubt
the emotions you held are bursting out

your revealing whats inside
understanding its only pride
you've been hurt so much before
your heart feels heavy with the sore

just let go the people say
its not that easy, it wont go away
you feel in love and now its gone
a piece of your soul forever drawn

to that one and only person
its so sure to worsen
when you know that love is just
a feeling that draws within us

to live the lies that we do tell
emotions trapped begin to swell
how could it of been true love
when all is destroyed thereof....

Copyright © saint ... [ 2004-05-18 17:29:19]
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Re: Love and Loveless (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 05:34:28 PM AEST
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Thoughtful as well as painful. I found myself feeling what you wrote as something like a memory of it happening to me. Wonderful work of art. Bravo and encore.
Love,
Chelsea

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