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insomnia
Contributed by
saint
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 05:27:28 PM in AEST
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insomnia is on my mind
peace and sleep are hard to find
the cogs are grinding in my head
but the silence is what i truly dread
because when all is quiet and dark
the mind wanders throught the devils arch
there he greets you with a smile
knowing what he has in mind, is surely vile!
he will tempt you with every delight
but resist him you must you might
falling deeper inside your thoughts
your brain twisting until it contorts
you feel yourself sinking through the floor
reaching out, grabbing, but missing the door
your stuck inside your encaged mind
battered down by an ancient bind
your lost inside the darkest hour
in an everlasting magical power
it's insomnia, playing a game
coaxing you into taking the blame
you fell for it and now you'll pay
with a never ending hellbound day.
Copyright ©
saint
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2004-05-18 17:27:28]
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Re: insomnia
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 05:38:52 PM AEST
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Great poem on Insomnia, you paint the picture of it with wonderful imagination.
I suffer from it and was going to post a poem also called Insomnia tomorrow lol, but after reading yours I dont think I will bother as it puts mine to shame lol
takecare,
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Re: insomnia
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 05:54:57 PM AEST
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I have insomnia - hate it when my brain won't go to sleep but my body is so tired I can't stand up lol. It is a trap, a mind game, hard to stop thinking when all wound up.
Great write.
merry |
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Re: insomnia
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:06:56 PM AEST
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| EXCELLENT!!!!!WELL DONE WELL WRITTEN..... |
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