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My Thoughts For Her
Contributed by
kittie30
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 05:02:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My thoughts are deep and strong. My feelings for her are regretting for all the pain they put me through.
My dream is being with her, laughing with her and clearing the tears from her face, she is so dear cant let her go but yet there's nothing there.
She dosnt know anything, i am just a friend there for support when i want so much more.
Dont have a clue how to appooach, so scared trembling in my shoes, teeth chattering, hands sweaty. i walk away with no more then what i started with.
BUT WHY?
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2004-05-18 17:02:30]
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Re: My Thoughts For Her
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by Jaded-Sunrise on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 05:26:08 PM AEST
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Hey,
I really liked your poem,you got your point across really well and you make it easy to relate too.Good Poem |
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Re: My Thoughts For Her
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by Katie2008 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:43:53 PM AEST
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| Aww, this poem is kind of sad and cute at the same time. I think that if this is something that is really happening to you, you should tell her because once you do you might feel a lot better, like there is less weight on your shoulders. Awesome piece! |
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