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Contributed by lil_angel on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:18:30 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Standing on the beach shore
My heart is like a door
The door is closed
To the love a man
The threats
The yelling
And the put downs have to stop
I think about all the “nice” words he had ever said
But there are none
He hates me
Never said anything to make me think differently
Hold me, comfort me hug me
Take away the pain
Help me love him
I don’t want his love
The pain hurts too much to bear
Open my heart Lord
Mend it
Heal it
Touch it
Then never leave me
September 24th 1998




Copyright © lil_angel ... [ 2004-05-18 16:18:30]
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Re: Closed (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:23:17 PM AEST
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dang girl, you seem to be digging up a lot of good writes from the past lately, this one's another beauty! ;0)
~Remy~


Re: Closed (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 07:26:11 PM AEST
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Wow. I really love this poem, it's incredibly! Great job!


Re: Closed (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 07:52:48 PM AEST
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Very Interesting & Enjoyable Read lil_angel !!!
Your Poems Are Always Good :-) Keep Em Coming !!!!!!!!!
LoVe - AnGeL


Re: Closed (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 12:38:48 PM AEST
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This excellent poem is more like a prayer than an unrequited love song. I hope your dreams/wishes come true for you.

bernard.


Re: Closed (User Rating: 1 )
by Stellar on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 01:56:55 PM AEST
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Great write! It's full of emotion and imagery.

Take care
Stellar




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