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O Sinful Hatred
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:40:22 PM in AEST
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Make a joke, a comment, don’t mind me
Just be warned, I may soon cease to be
But don’t you come grovelling at my grave, or think you’re queen of the earth
For I will hate you and rid of you, and you will despise your own birth
I will free you of blood, I will drink from your veins
I will cause you to hurt, I will force upon you these stains
Stains of truth, they will see through you then
And you will hurt as I have, again and again
But I will not let you die, I will not let you follow me
I must keep you suffering, not let you free
You stuck-up cow, who the hell do you think you are?
How dare you tell me how to live my life when you haven’t fallen this far
But wait, don’t despair, for your time is yet to come
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Re: O Sinful Hatred
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:44:25 PM AEST
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I hope this poem means that you are putting anger ,hatred and ignorance in its place, AWAY from you? This is wrought with emotion, and as all your works,they speak for themselves. Excellent portrayal of your angst.
Keep writing, keep venting...it feeeels good, right??? {{{charlotte}}} :-)
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: O Sinful Hatred
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:44:42 PM AEST
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very angry I enjoyed it. I liked the stains of truth part. Keep up the writing.
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Re: O Sinful Hatred
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:09:18 PM AEST
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oi, strong writing... hope it's fueled in the right direction... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: O Sinful Hatred
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:17:37 PM AEST
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Powerful powerful write, one of the best on here. Well done.
Pixie xx |
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Re: O Sinful Hatred
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by arden on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 03:15:38 PM AEST
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wow like everyone else has said, Powerful!
this was awesome! i love the emotion and the anger.
f*cking sweet girl.
Arden |
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Re: O Sinful Hatred
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by blueheart on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:47:12 PM AEST
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Wow, such raw emotion you have placed here Charlotte.
Very dark indeed with much anger and bitterness.
Amazing. |
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Re: O Sinful Hatred
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by BlackFire9786 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 10:43:12 AM AEST
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Wow, Charlotte, that's awesome! You are such an amazing writer! Very angry, i know the feeling, and i can feel it again reading this poem. Great job! I haven't talked to you in soo long! Pm me! *Hugs*
~Lisa |
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Re: O Sinful Hatred
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:10:52 AM AEST
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ouch!! If this write didnt get the point across to whoever you are mad at they must be deaf and dumb.
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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