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Left Out
Contributed by
SourPatchGurl
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:16:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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They don't include me
in the fun games that they play
Why am I left out?
Copyright ©
SourPatchGurl
... [
2004-05-18 15:16:59] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Left Out
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:45:20 PM AEST (User
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Sadly beautiful.... Lovely haiku
Jenni |
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Re: Left Out
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:02:34 PM AEST (User
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working within the structures of the haiku, superb... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Left Out
(User Rating: 1 ) by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:33:53 PM AEST (User
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aw.. this is so sad.. but nicely written..
charlotte x_x_x |
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