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The Dinner
Contributed by
pixie
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:12:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Last Friday you cooked a meal for me,
You showed your true feelings and they ran free,
No-one has ever done that for me before,
It made me feel special right through to my core.
You even cooked my favourite meal,
How loved can one woman feel,
You might think it wasn’t much,
But my heart , deeply it did touch.
After we’d eaten we had a drink together,
We belong as one like birds of a feather,
We curled up close on the settee,
So much in love, just you and me.
I’ll hold that night close to my heart for an eternity,
All of a sudden you turned to me,
You told me how deep your love does run,
And how you enjoy being with me and of all the fun.
As the night was drawing to it’s end,
I realised not only are you my lover, also a treasured friend,
I appreciate every single thing that you do,
I’d never take you for granted, that is true.
The aroma of food and love flowed that Friday,
I’ll love you always come what may,
Mark this is my thank-you for the lovely dinner,
I know in you, I’ve picked myself a real winner!
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-05-18 15:12:28]
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Re: The Dinner
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by SourPatchGurl on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:23:06 PM AEST
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| This is a really good poem! Keep them coming. |
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Re: The Dinner
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by Another_Dimension on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:28:53 PM AEST
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| This is amazing, You can tell that you mean't these words, you can just feel it. 5/5 once again x |
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Re: The Dinner
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:00:57 PM AEST
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| *sniff* this is pretty, but damn i miss that life... |
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Re: The Dinner
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:08:17 PM AEST
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This is quite different from the other two of yours that I read! But still good, and full of emotion.. Well done..
charlotte x_x_x |
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