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Fine
Contributed by
remy
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:54:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
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(read through this how you want, it's all for you oh beloved authors!)
this hum of machines belongs right outside
... not in my eyes.
now a devil calls for the right to my insides
it feels defeating, i'll be alright...
well then oh fine
... not in my eyes.
keep it pressed down under ground this ocean...
it will make me feel much better.
well then oh fine
... not in my eyes.
let me chance this right and i'll take you
well maybe...
well here we have been going for some time this time
heading down this way with a line upon line...
this hum of machines belongs left outside
... not in my eyes.
now an angel calls for the right to my insides
it feels completing, i'll be so right...
well here we have been going for some time this time
heading down this way with a line upon line...
our time
so spent and quick spent at the best
well fine
i'll do my best to move on to else
and there you are, well you make me crazy
in a look, in a glance, in a look, in a look, it's crazy.
well you can't see me down tearing up my own insides
but you don't seem to mind, well...
what more today, what would i say
one more to stay, one could i play
what more to say, what would today
one more to play, one could i stay
well here we have been going for some time this time
heading down this way with a line upon line...
our time
so spent and quick spent at the best
well fine
i'll do my best to move on to else
what more today, what would i say
one more to stay, one could i play
what more to say, what would today
one more to play, one could i stay
let me chance this right and i'll take you
well maybe...
[FINE - Freaked Out, Insecure, Neurotic, Emotional...]
Copyright ©
remy
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2004-05-18 14:54:06]
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Re: Fine
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:37:28 PM AEST
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i always enjoy reading your poems remy because you hvae such different styles to mine... well done mate you've produced a piece of work to be proud of - again!
am glade you feel FINE ;) |
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Re: Fine
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:40:30 PM AEST
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interesting, very nice of you to think of us all, it is a pleasure having you here too, dear remy, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Fine
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:06:32 PM AEST
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Great write, imagination used alot in this,look forward to reading more from you soon,
Pixie x |
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Re: Fine
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 05:49:48 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful.... :) |
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